Nothing. Nada. Zip. = {Slacker}

Yep, that' me. The slacker.

I haven't written ANYTHING AT ALL since this past Fall. {I know- smack me. Hard.} I'm just outta words, inspiration and frustrated with doing the whole 3rd person thing. Honestly, I think it's because I can't write very smoothly in 3rd person and so I'm avoiding it. Candace Salima {an awesome writer and lady} has urged me to write my novel in 3rd person. Ok.
Well, not so easy for me.

I think I need to try harder in learning how to write in 3rd person better or defeat the whole thing and go back to writing {and re-writing} in 1st person. I need to make a decision quick! I need to get back to writing this novel. I'm tired of slacking on this project and dream.

The LDS Storymakers Conference is coming up in April. I have had plans this whole time to attend. But I think I may not be able to make it. Sad, sad, sad am I.
It looks like I have an opportunity to take a temp job at a Power Plant about four hours north of Phoenix, where I live, for two months.
I'm not a working mom- in fact, the last time I worked was when I was pregnant with my first baby- twelve years ago. I now have 5 kids.
This will be a HUGE change for me and a HUGE adventure. Since it is a temp job and the money is FREAKIN' AWESOME- I can't pass it up. Thus, I won't be able to attend the conference as I had planned. I'm bummed.

On the other hand- it's a little bit of a relief that I won't be showing my face in shame to the people who have encouraged me in my writing and I haven't got much to show for it since the last time I saw them a year ago. Grrrrrrr

I'm mad at myself for being such a slacker.

Same 'ole, same 'ole

Still working on rewriting first person to third person in my novel.

This is a task, let me tell you!

Committed

I'm keeping to what I committed to do this month... to completely re-write my 37.000 plus words, in my partially completed novel, from first person to third. It's been time consuming, just as I anticipated, but it's getting closer and closer to being done.
Though, it's kinda good and bad in a way. Good in that I'm getting a goal accomplished but bad because I find myself wanting to re-write many scenes! Since I'm NOT in the editing phase, yet, I'm desperately pulling myself away from re-writing. It will only take up more time. It's tempting and down right hard to not re-write!

Also, I wanted to point out that through having this blog, as well as my other- more personal- blog, I write often. It may be only a little something here or there- but I put a lot of time and thought into what I post. {Most of the time.}
Blogging has really helped me to become a better writer. I enjoy having these blogs, getting to write whatever my mind fancies. :) But as of late, I've been more grateful in that I am becoming a better writer through blogging.

Last Night

I attended my chapter of the monthly ANWA meeting {American Night Writers Association} last night. It's a support and critiquing group for LDS women writers.

I received some really great feedback on the excerpt I decided to share. I'm tickled to know there are people who are interested in my novel and can't wait to read more. Also, I came away feeling another strong affirmation that I truly am writing this novel for a purpose bigger then me. I have felt this very strongly since I began this novel- but it's amazing how I can feel so right about doing something and then turn around and doubt myself or let fear set in. Gosh, I find Satan a real pain!

After the close of our meeting we all shared what goals we planned on accomplishing this month. I announced my goal of completely finishing the re-write of the 37,000 plus words I've written so far in my novel from first person to third person. I've been plucking away at it off and on but admit that I've given much more attention to writing new scenes instead.
I suppose by voicing it out loud to others and by me writing this- I'm holding myself accountable, which I need to do. I will FINISH the task I've been avoiding like the plague! There- I said it. No take backs, Autumn!

At the ANWA meeting next month- I will be teaching a 10 minute lesson on Copyright laws. I don't know a whole lot on this topic so I'm pleased to research and prepare this lesson.

{If you want to read what my novel is about- click here.
If you want to read an excerpt of my novel- click here.}

Long time no see... write... or hear!

I'm so ashamed to say I've neglected this blog something fierce. Not cool. I have another blog I keep up with about my daily life, other projects and family. I tend to write a lot on that blog. This blog is strictly for writing purposes. Shame on me for being so neglectful!

I've been writing in my novel, "As we greet with a kiss", off and on through-out this past summer but not as often as I'd like. Now that school has begun, and have only one little guy home, I can find more time then before to devote to my writing. :)

I'm still in the stage of getting it all out on paper. I have re-written several scenes from first person to third {tedious and annoying} but have much more to do. I go back and forth with writing new scenes in third person and editing the old first person to third.

I've been reading a lot as well and have enjoyed that. They say the more you read the better writer you will be. I totally believe that now that I've put in into practice! If you're thinking this is unnecessary advice...believe me...it's NOT! It's amazing to me the help, inspiration and the finding of 'my own writing voice' that has developed from reading good books...and often.

First to Third

I'm in the midst of re-writing my novel - that is only about half way written- from first person to third. It's been hard for me because writing in first person is much easier for me.

Candace Salima has urged me to have my novel in third person simply because you can have several points of view instead of just one. I can see the value in this so I'm taking the time to re-write. Boy, is a piece of work! Not easy- at all!

Itching

It's been a long time coming since I wrote on this blog last! I keep this blog for "writing" purposes and since writing isn't what I'm doing right now {I'm reading} I haven't had too much to say on the subject. Until today...

My heart is a flutter with my novel, my characters, their conversations, the plot, the sub-plots. You know the feeling you get when there's a word or description on the tip of your tongue and you want to just say it but you can't because you just can't quite remember it? It's SO frustrating to feel that way! Well, I feel that way about my novel/writing. I sorta know what I want but not clearly. I sorta know what I want to say, describe and share...but it's just not coming out. And you guessed right- it's SO frustrating!

In my minds eye when this novel, "As we greet with a kiss", is through it will be a genuine, sweet and touching novel. I can just feel it in my bones! I'm just itching to get it ALL out of me!

"Too quiet"

"Too quiet" am I says Tristi. And she's right- I've totally neglected this blog and it needs some TLC.

Candace Salima gave me some homework for my 'writing time'. I am to read a few books and answer a 100 questionnaire for my main characters in order to get to know them personally. So- though I am busy doing that these days- including the diversion of reading Stephenie Meyer's new novel- The Host- I really should still be keeping up with this blog. Sorry.

If you haven't read on my Queen of Chaos blog {which I give more TLC too...and I know I really shouldn't play favorites...but in this case I think it's OK? Maybe not.}
Anyway- my hubby is in Utah training for a job for at least 3 months- possibly longer- and will be coming home to see us about every 3 weeks or so. We have 5 children ages 11 to 2 and I know I don't need to write it for the world to see... but it will make me feel better...

I am busy as a bee doing it ALL!! Taxi service, Nurse, Homework, Cook, Cleaner, Laundress, Drill Sergent...and the list goes on and on. I did all these things before Warren was gone so I'm not training on anything listed above but I am doing it alone. It does make a difference when an extra set of burly, loving and handsome hands aren't helping me out.

So that's what's been going on... but I will try being a better blog care- giver and blog visitor!

Tagged

I was tagged by my new friend, Kim, and thought I'd do as she wished- but MY style. Here's about ME:

Journaling reads:

As a mother of five I am plain busy. But as for just me, Autumn, and what I'm up to in 2008:
I am writing my first novel, blogging, scrapbooking both with paper and digitally, always making things for my home and other crafts. I bake my own whole wheat bread, hold a Book of Mormon study group in my home once a week, teach the 7/8 year old kids at church - my daughter, Emmalese, is in my class. I love to go on dates with my husband, Warren, and have fun family nights with my kids. I love going to the movie, attending the temple, playing games and getting together with friends. I work out off and on- but I get lazy sometimes. I love the color PINK and my favorite number is 5. I am addicted to Dr. Pepper and I am trying to wean my 2 yr old from nursing.
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Born: September 28, 1975 in Provo, Utah
Baptized: Age 8- July 4, 1983
Married: Age 18- August 22, 1994 to Warren Paul Weber
Became a mother: Age 22- May 31, 1997 to Conner Paul Weber
Became a mother four more times to: Parker Kimble Weber, Emmalese Jayne Weber,
Spencer Reed Weber and Tucker Miles Weber.

Introducing...

Frank Cole!

I met Frank at the LDS Storymakers conference last month. When I talked to him about the book he's writing -'The Adventures of Hashbrown Winters' - I laughed and laughed! I think it's GOLD. I bugged him way too many times at the conference about getting this book published! {Sorry, Frank. I can be pushy and annoying and...well we won't continue on.}
He has other books he's written and preparing for submission, as well. I really enjoy his writing style and great sense of humor.

Frank has just started his blog...so let's all go on over and get a dose of the hilarious and fun FRANK COLE, you won't be sorry.

So what is she writing about?

I decided to post what my novel is about since I've had several people ask. I'm currently half way through with it but it's still a rough draft so who knows...I could end up changing it all during one of my bazillion edits. Writing ain't easy that's for sure!

Here's the real kicker: Candace, my awesome mentor, wants this novel done, finished, complete, in ONE year. By the next LDS Storymakers Conference I will attend next Spring- I need this novel ready to be pitched to publishers! Talk about panic mode. One year may seem like a long time to write a novel...but I really pray I can accomplish this goal. This isn't easy stuff.

Below isn't a 'synopsis' at all. In fact- I loath the day I have to write a real synopsis because it is very difficult. But since I am still a young writer- humor me as I try to explain what my novel is about.

'As We Greet With A Kiss' begins in the premortal life with a young woman named Emily who has a twin brother named Jacobi. These twins are very close and have mutual friends. The war in heaven is on the verge of exploding and the lives of many will change. Jacobi has been cautiously visiting Lucifer and his followers in their secret meetings knowing full well he is defying Fathers wishes. Jacobi ends up being cast out of heaven with out a physical body to roam the earth and universe along with Lucifer and his minions. This crushes Emily, and many others, to the core, to watch 1/3 of their siblings cast away on their own free will.

The novel then fast forwards to when Emily is a teenage girl on earth. She is faced with decisions and consequences like all human beings but she has an extra hard time mentally, physically and emotionally with some of these issues because her unseen twin, Jacobi, is trying his all to sabotage her.

Emily is the oldest child in her family and has to share a bedroom with her younger sister, Rebekah, who she has major sibling rivalry issues with.

Emily has a couple of close girlfriends she relies on. Ruby who is a true friend through and through and also Felicia, who betrays her. Jacobi has a lot to do with working through Felicia in betrayals.

Emily has an awesome boyfriend on earth, Brock. But she doesn't know that her premortal love, Tucker, will soon be in her mortal life. Emily will have to make one of the hardest choices in her life.

On Emily's sixteenth birthday she receives a letter from her once close paternal grandmother, Emily, her namesake, who passed away eight years earlier. It's a secret letter kept from her knowledge, by her parents, upon the request of Grandmother Emily. The letter contains some intimate words and reassurances that Emily needs. Later that night Emily has a dream, but in reality it's more then a dream. Emily has the rare privilege of getting to pass through the veil to meet, talk and spend time with her Grandmother Emily. These 'dreams' happen many times where Emily is able to leave earth as a spirit to greet her grandmother with a kiss.

I need a name!

I need some help deciding on a name for one of my side characters!!

It's a teenage girl who is friends with my main character, Emily, and another side character named Ruby.

Ruby is the true friend. This other no name friend will be a betrayal to Emily.

Any suggestions????

Wrestling

There are so many things I am wrestling with in my life. Among a few are: my weight, my writing, creating a good home atmosphere and life for my family, following the Lord's promptings, having more faith and forgiving those who have deeply wounded me. I know that these are things the average person deals with and I'm not alone. It's so easy to look at others successes and look back at yourself with frustration. {Which I am very good at doing.}

One of the things that has helped me is watching General Conference. Feeling the Lord's words and spirit has influenced me to make better choices. Another thing that has helped me is surrounding myself with good people. People who are positive and who love me no matter what. I have been very, very blessed with some of God's greatest daughters for girlfriends and their families on this earth. I am a better woman because of them!

I haven't 'won' any of these wrestling matches- yet anyway- but I am trying. Half of growing in this life is the fight. It's not the fun part but it is the part that counts toward weather or not you grow. I'm not feeling sorry for myself, well sometimes I do feel sorry for myself, but right now I'm just at a crossroads in my decision making on conquering these battles.

Whatever your battles may be- I hope you can beat the hell out of them as I'm trying to!

Home

After a long and eventful two weeks-- I am home. Ah, home. There's nothing quite like it.

There's so much I could share just about the two day LDS Storymakers conference that I could bore one to death. But I will say that I had such a wonderful time. Not only did I get to meet many of you blogger buddies I've been corresponding with but I got to reunite with a couple I already have met. It was like a reunion! So cool!

There was so much information packed in the conference I felt like my brain was going to leave fuming and sputtering, but I came out alright. I'm pleased to have gotten out of the conference what I needed and then some.

The Whitney Award Gala was fantastic. To see and talk with many talented writers was such an awesome experience for me. And then to get to watch the winners and hear their comments was very touching.

To my delight, the sweet, sassy and opinionated {just like me} Candace Salima gave me the honors of becoming my mentor! Oh, my goodness am I on cloud nine. I had breakfast with her a few days after the conference and we talked for a few hours. It soon became apparent why she felt the desire to help me. I feel so blessed, beyond words, really.

Candace has me on a schedule and I intend to follow her wise counsel. I have some books I'm to read first with no writing this month. Then an outline of my novel is needed. Sorry Tristi...I'm bummed to miss the 3rd BIAM challenge. I hope to join you next round.

My goal is to have my novel 'As we greet with a kiss' finished by the next LDS Storymakers conference- Spring 2009. That may seem like a long time for me to write but I only hope I can finish on time. Wish me luck and many prayers!

On my way...

On Wednesday my family and I are traveling up to Utah so that I can attend the LDStorymakers Conference! We are taking the opportunity while the kiddos are off for Spring Break {and an extra week} to visit family and friends while in Utah. We will be gone for 2 whole weeks.

Even though we will be having fun as a family...I can hardly wait to see my blooger buddies and feast on the knowledge at the conference. For those of you traveling to Utah for this grand event...be safe! Don't be shy about tapping me on the shoulder and saying HI. :)

I will be taking a break from this blog for the next couple weeks....I'll post when I get home.

Reflections of Christ

Click here to view my other blog about this awesome artist.

The time is right

I want to share something that I posted on Stephanie Humphrey's blog. Soemthing that I learned at the ANWA conference I was blessed to attend last weekend.

A comment from author, Heather Madder, made. She said that there is a time for everything. At this point if you're in the writing stage- you will be done when your supposed to be done. Your book will be published when it is supposed to be and the right publisher will be there when it's supposed to be. Your work will touch the people you need to touch when it is time.

I loved this and gained a lot of strength from it. Remember whatever stage you are in right now is what your supposed to do. The time is not ready for anything but.

Conference Update

I went to the said conference and had such an uplifting and empowering day! I rubbed shoulders with some of the most talented authors around and had a wonderful time learning. My most favorite part of the whole conference was the tones of spirituality that were brought to attention along with our writing lectures. I was touched in many ways and even had a GIANT epiphany during one of the lectures. YES!

Also, I met up with Tristi Pinkston and absolutely loved talking with her. She had the most AMAZING class--E V E R! What a talented woman! Tristi even lent me her signed ARC {Advance Readers Copy} of James Dashner's new book that she had to critique! It's called The 13th Reality. I am thrilled to read this with my boys! {Actually, we have read the first 8 chapters already!} If interested in this book {the first in a series} click here. AWESOME stuff!

ANWA Conference

I'm a member of ANWA {American Night Writers Association}. This is a writers group for LDS women. There are several chapters in Arizona, Utah, Washington, Nevada and Alabama. And I belong to one of the chapters in Glendale, AZ.


Tomorrow, bright and early, I am driving out to Gilbert {approx. 45 min. from my home in Phoenix} for the annual American Night Writers Associaion conference. I am super excited to go feast on other authors knowledge and ideas as they give their lectures. It's an all day event: 8 am to 5:30 pm. I have several lectures I will attend to my liking throughout the day with an hour lunch break. The one person I am thrilled to meet up with is my blogger buddy, and author, Tristi Pinkston! Tristi lives in Utah. She has come here to teach through out the day and I will be attending one of her lectures. YIPPEE!

I guess I need to go to bed now...I need my beauty sleep!

I'm a forgetful freak

I can't believe it! {Well, I can because this is SO like me.} I registered for the LDStorymakers Conference and as a registrant I could submit a "First Chapter" for a contest. I planned on doing this and was excited because it would help me rewrite/ edit the scenes needed.

AND I FORGOT TO SUBMIT!!!!!!!!! The due date was February 21st. Hello, today is February 25th. I'm such a forgetful freak! My head is held low in shame.

I did it!

On a previous post, I shared how I was attending the LDStorymakers Conference next month, and how I signed up for Boot Camp. Well, this 'Boot Camp' has some homework to be completed before hand and I am excited to share....I DID IT! Hip Hip Horray!!!

To read the homework I had you can read here.

Now off to fine tune my entries...

Quotes for thought and laughter:

A good novel tells us the truth about it's hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.
- Gilbert K. Chesterton***


If you can't annoy somebody, there's little point in writing.
-Kingsley Amis***


It's a damn good story. If you have any comments, write them on the back of a check.
- Erle Stanley Gardner***


The secret of good writing is to say an old thing in a new way or to say a new thing in an old way.
- Richard Harding Davis***



When I was a little boy, they called me a liar, but now that I am grown up, they call me a writer.
- Isaac Bashevis Singer***


I love being a writer. What I can't stand is the paperwork.
- Peter De Vries***


Manuscript: something submitted in haste and returned at leisure.
- Oliver Herford***

Will you be MY

Happy love day to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now I have to work

I'm registered for the 2008 LDStorymakers Conference in Utah that is held next month. {I'm so excited!} One of the things I'm doing there is "Boot Camp". Now that sounds like hard work, huh? I thought... well, maybe, but it's probably just a name they came up with...it's not really hard work. Then I got an e-mail last night:




"For over two hours each day, you will sit at the feet of the experts and learn how to make your writing better. They will look at your writing and give you tips on how to make it stronger. Your particular strengths and weaknesses will be examined, and you'll learn how to improve and how to magnify the strengths you have. All of this is done in a friendly, supportive environment. Where else would you get personal attention of this caliber? Well, I sure don't know!



In order to prepare for your Boot Camp experience, I would ask you to begin assembling the following things: A pen or pencil, A highlighting marker, A notebook, A high-protein snack (I'm told food will be served, but I'm not sure what, and we need you strong!!)



You are also asked to look through your work in progress and find pages that correspond with the topics we'll be covering, which are:



Balancing Your Writing,
Showing Emotion,
Believable Antagonists,
Choosing Your Words,
Dialogue vs. Narrative and
Exposition Creating Lovable Characters



Find about two pages for each topic. For instance, say you have a scene where you need help making your character seem more real -- bring that for Creating Lovable Characters. If you have a scene that needs to show a lot of emotion, bring that for Showing Emotion. For Balancing Your Writing, just find a segment that shows a range of dialogue and narrative. Find a snippet from your work in progress that matches up with each topic. Each snippet should be 1-2 pages long, typed up, and you are asked to bring nine copies of each. That is a little bit to compile, which is why we're giving you some advance notice, but it's all worth it. The others at your table can each look over a copy of your work and give their feedback, which is so valuable. So again, six snippets from your work, nine copies of each."



Doesn't this sound like WORK? Heck, yes! Dang it...I gotta WORK!!!!

YOU MAKE MY DAY

Miss Tristi Pinkston showered me with kind words today and gave me this award! Oh, shucks! :) I'm officially on CLOUD 9. Isn't it funny how the littlest things can make your day? I suppose it just goes to show that each of us really can make a difference in others lives with small, random acts of kindness. Thanks, again Trisiti.

Now I have to share how I feel about Tristi. I am always amazed at her powerful words and the way she can encourage and love at the same time. I feel energized almost everytime I read her blogs and I am so happy I can call her a blogger friend. I think if I lived near her she'd be a good friend of mine...since I only allow the best of the best in my circle of friends. ;) You really do make me smile too, Tristi.

Now- This award is to be shared...so I will pass this award on to those who really make my day.

After I've thought about it I am having a very hard time giving out this award! Well, to be honest anytime ANYONE leaves me a comment...I smile and it makes my day. So if you want to make my day...just leave me a note. ;) Thanks to you all for showing love, kindness and support. I really cherish it.

More about ME

I generally write more about me and what's going on in my life on a seperate blog, Queen of Chaos. If ya wanna take a peek click here. Don't be shy on leaving comments there!

Our new Prophet!

For the new leadership of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints- our Prophet and his two councelors have been called of God!! ---

Thomas S. Monson- President
Henry B. Eyring- 1st Counselor

Dieter F. Uchtdorf- 2nd Counselor

I hit the JACKPOT!!

Read about my awesome news on my personal blog. Click here.

Goodbye, Farewell- 'till we meet again.

Gordon Bitner Hinckley
June 23, 1910- January 27, 2008

As a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter day Saints- I am saddened and happy for the loss of our Prophet and President of our Church. To me he was the essence of all goodness, greatness and happiness that can be obtained in this life. His example was unwavering and his actions were momentous. He will be missed by so many! His humor, for one, will be sorely missed.

As for being happy- well his wife, Marjorie, passed away April 6, 2004 and I know he surely missed her. The thought of them being reunited today is very touching and joyous for me. And as the leader of The Lord's church here on earth- I know his reunion with Him on high is one of great honor.

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I was able to be in the presence of this great man of God a few years back. My husband and I attended a grand meeting in Houston, Texas where several speakers shared counsel and testimonies of the gospel. President Hinckley and his wife, Marjorie, were in attendance as well. When he entered the room- all was quiet for a moment. Then all stood in one motion, and full of respect and gratitude, we all sang the hymn, "We thank thee Oh God for a Prophet" in unison. The spirit of the God was so strong in this place that tears were pouring from every eye. What a memory I will ALWAYS cherish.

President Gordon B. Hinckley served as president of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints church since March 12, 1995 and has been a member of its top leadership since the 1960s. He died about 7 p.m. Sunday (9 p.m. ET) with his family by his side, from heath related issues due to his age.

To read more about Gordon B. Hinckley's life- click here.

A dedication?

Have you considered a dedication for your novel/book as you're writing? Or for those who have completed a novel {or more} how was the process of dedicating your book?

Because of the content of my novel I feel strongly that my dedication should be for my paternal grandmother who passed away almost 5 years ago.

Here is a very brief snippet about my novel "As we greet with a kiss"... {please bare with me. This is not a synopsis by any means. I dread the day I have to write it!}:

Sixteen year old Emily Jayne Walker, named after her paternal grandmother who passed away from breast cancer eight years earlier, finds herself with the rare opportunity to visit her grandmother many times in the sphere beyond the veil through dreams. Emily is able to get to know her grandmother on a very intimate and personal level through these interludes as well as learning amazing truths. The novel covers what happened before her mortality, her choices made in the preexistence, the war in heaven, friendships she made and a love she had. Unknowingly during her mortality- one of Emily's best friends in the preexistence- {who chose to follow Lucifer instead of Father} becomes one of the evil spirits who tempts Emily while in mortality.

I spent over an hour trying to word my dedication 'just so' for my grandmother. This is what I have come up with:

To my Eternal Grandmother
~ Bonnie ~
Even though my privilege of getting to know you in this life was brief; I feel your incessant love and personal desire to serve me from across the veil.

My gift of sincere gratitude

and undying devotion is yours.

Typing away...

I apologize for not showing loves to my blogger friends...I've been busy with family and writing, writing and more writing. I purposely refrained from peeking at your blogs too much...even reporting my progess on Tristi's Callenges so that I could focus. And it worked!

I am so happy to share that I am ahead of my goal so far and have added another 4,000 plus words towards my goal for January!!!!!!!!! Technically, I could quit and call it good since I have met my personal goal to double my word count in my novel from when I started this month...but I will keep clicking away since I still have many days left for this challenge.

Cheers to a 40,000 PLUS word count!!!!!!!

Picking up

I'm picking up the pieces of my life today. As the mother and homemaker- being sick for a few days last week really put a halt on the flow of things for our family. My husband did what he could but I need to fine tune.



As for working on the BIAM challenge- I'm picking up where I left off. I wasn't able to write two days last week and that's going to hurt my goal and grand total. But hey- what can ya do? I plan to write later tonight after kids are in bed.

And above... is my awesome family! I am posting this photo because Tristi was unaware and surprised I had 5 children. Maybe others don't know of my fortune. I don't mind showing them off. These people are MY LIFE and MY LOVE. {Yes, we have only 1 Princess and 4 Knights in invisible armor}

*&@# UGH *@#*

Oh, so sick am I.

I want my mommy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Temptation to Tweak

I don't know about you guys who are participating in the BIAM challenge- but for me to just write and write and write with no looking back... with no re-writing at this point in the game is so hard! I wanna tweak so bad- my fingers ache! I am forcing myself not to take away precious allotted time for writing a first draft to re-writing and re-writing again for perfection.

Is it killing you?

Just making the time.

Making time for this BIAM challenge has been a little more difficult then I'd imagined, of course. Doesn't it always go that way? Whenever I think something will be a breeze I jinx myself! HA!

I have found that since my desire for this challenge is to be a success...I just make time. I just do. Sometimes it isn't feasible by any means. But for the most part...I just have to make time.

How about you? What are you struggling with or making progress with?

How many writers does it take to change a light bulb?

Answer: Ten.

1st draft. Hero changes light bulb.
2nd draft. Villain changes light bulb.
3rd draft. Hero stops villain from changing light bulb. Villain falls to death.
4th draft. Lose the light bulb.
5th draft. Light bulb back in. Fluorescent instead of tungsten.
6th draft. Villain breaks bulb, uses it to kill hero's mentor.
7th draft. Fluorescent not working. Back to tungsten.
8th draft. Hero forces villain to eat light bulb.
9th draft. Hero laments loss of light bulb. Doesn't change it.
10th draft. Hero changes light bulb.

On a whim...

As I shared in my last post- I wanted to try writing on a whim with no preconceived ideas on how my novel 'should' be.

I thought this would be very difficult since I'm a perfectionist in many areas of my life. I have to share that I feel invigorated and free for once since I began this novel just by taking my challenge to practice!

I have written 1,669 words in the last two days!! This is HUGE guys- I mean HUGE for me. :)

BIAM= Book in a Month

Just as I accepted Tristi Pinkston's challenge for BIAM {Book in a Month} a few months ago... I'm ready to take it on again for her second round!!

Since I am still working on the same novel I was back then- I will just add upon this total during the month of January and that hind number will be my total at the end of this BIAM challenge.

I'm pleased to share that I started this months challenge with 21,143 words already in my novel. :) { A great accomplishment for me} I hope to at least DOUBLE this by the end of this month/challenge...for a total of 42,286 words toward my novel. That would make a daily goal of 783 words {taking Sundays off}.

Now the big question is: Will this word goal even be possible for me? I'm nervous to ask my self questions like this because last BIAM challenge I really over anticipated my ability and put my goal way out of reach. This time I'd like to make it attainable. I've been thinking hard about this very question and I am confident this is the course of action I need to take. So, YES- this word count is possible for me!

How do I know? Because I said so- that's why. ;) There is another strategy I'd like to try. I'd like to write at a whim- with no preconceived terms on how it 'should' be. If I do this I think I will be surprised at what I can come up with.

Goodbye 2007...Hello 2008!

My moment

Do you know that moment in time when all just makes sense? You know, when you just happen to "get it"? In other words- the duh moment for us mortals. Our relatives and guardians who are across the veil are sighing in relief at such occasions- I am sure- since they have worked hard to help us 'see the light'. For such a momentous slice in time- they excitedly rejoice- I am confident!!

Well- how I feel right here, right now is the recognition of such. A question that has been flying around in space for me is: Am I writing my novel for the world to read as a generic or am I going to write for predominately LDS readers? I've had no inclination or such inspiration to lead me to a confirmation. To this point I have felt that my work could be enjoyed by most readers- well, I should clarify- most Christian readers.

Until tonight.

Something very profound- I will even call it spiritual- happened. I was typing away as I feverishly tried to convey what my mind was thinking, when I wrote the words 'our Father'. As in our Heavenly Father- since this is a scene where He takes the lead. As quickly as I typed it... I deleted it. What came next was a bit of a surprise for me- I typed 'our Father and Mother'. As in our heavenly parents. As I made this change a peaceful and warm feeling spread through my body as if I was being assured I did the right thing. If that isn't evidence enough for me... I don't know what is. So to answer my question to myself...I will be writing for predominately LDS readers. Interesting. Wow. It feels great to have more direction!

If you are reading this and you are not LDS or do not have a belief that our Father in heaven has a spouse, our Heavenly Mother- then now you know we believe in such a beautiful concept. And in my novel...She will grace our Fathers side as His loving companion. :)

Inspired to tears...

As I was browsing blogs {ah, like the good ole' days before Christmas hit} I came to Tristi Pinkstons site and read some quotes on her side bar. I have to share that I was hit with a strong rush of emotion as I read this quote by Virginia Smith:

"God has plans for your writing. And believe me, they're better than any plans you have for yourself. Let Him be in charge, and let Him delight you with what He has in store."

I believe this with all my heart. If we are looking at our mortal life with an eternal perspective we would want our life to be in tune with our Father's wishes and desires. This would be the case with writing as well. Thank you Tristi for sharing this amazing and profound quote. I really needed to read this.

Merry Christmas

I hope you had a wonderful time with loved ones today and- the one thing that matters the most - a personal re-connection with our Savior as we celebrate His life and eternal mission.

Christmas love, Autumn

A chance meeting?

Having a blog to journal my hopes, dreams- highs and lows has been fun. I think it makes it worth the while when you have readers who are in the same place you are in life and share on their blogs as well. Also- the simple act of being one anothers' cheerleaders is definitely the best part of doing this.

Now- I wouldn't have ever thought I'd 'meet' any of my readers or cheerleaders in person...but I'm so excited to share that this past weekend I had the opportunity to meet Stephanie Humphreys in person! She is from Alberta, Canada and I live in Phoenix, Arizona...how likely would our chances of meeting? Well- since the world is a small place, after all- Stephanie traveled down here to my city for the funeral of her great-grandmother...so we took the opportunity to meet. We met at the mall- had lunch and chatted without missing a beat. It was amazing, fun, great and wonderful!!

Thanks for taking some time out of your day to have lunch with me, Stephanie. :) I had a fantastic time with you and getting to know you better. I hope and pray your travels home during the next couple days are safe. But most of all- thank you for being one of my cheerleaders!

Hallelujah!!!!

I am so excited, ecstatic, happy, thrilled, pleased and every other kind positive emotion!!

For me- trying to reach the 20,000 word mark in my novel has been looming like a black cloud over my head....but no more. I finally hit my 20,000 plus word count!! YES!

Vacation

I guess I'm on 'vacation'. Nothing towards my novel, reading or blogging is happening these days. With five children and the holidays...need I say more? When I get a moment or so I will try to check your writings and updates of you, my fellow blogger friends, ...until then here's something to read and if your industrious enough at the moment you can apply these principles you will learn in your writing this month. {I won't be!}

Plot - What is it and How do I get one? {by Carolyn Jewel}
Plotting your story takes attention to detail. Whichever comes first for you, the plot or the characters, the characters need to be believable in the plot. Or maybe the plot needs to be believable for the characters. Six of one, half dozen of another. As long as your readers end up believing.
It is my personal belief plotting is hard work and there isn't any way to make it easy, so if you're looking for easy, you won't find it here. What you'll find here is my approach and the process I go through to arrive at a story that editors want to buy. I urge you-- no, make that plead with you-- to think really, really hard about you read here. Even if, perhaps even especially if, you find this doesn't work for you, figuring out why it doesn't work for you will help you discover what will.
The time you take to absorb and digest and bring yourself to an understanding of the issues is worth every agonizing minute. I swear.
Some Preliminaries:
Because it's convenient, I'll define Plot as "Your Story in a Nutshell." Which leaves the hard part in need of another term which I have decided to call The Story.
Think of your plot as a container and your story as what will fill the container.
One more thing to say up front is I'm not going to be telling you exactly how go about this. Some people do extensive brainstorming before they write a word, others go straight to the writing in order to get a handle on things. There is no right answer (or if there is, I don't know it yet), but I suspect that the less thinking you do beforehand, the more re-writing and adjusting you need to do later, a situation that is neither bad nor good, UNLESS you mistake the need for re-writing for failure.
Plot: What your story is about.

Some Examples of Plots:

Boy Meets Girl -
Secret Baby -
Marriage of Convenience -
Marriage for the sake of Honor.

Well, that's all folks. (OK, not really) Your plot can be anything. Space aliens inhabiting your doormat, a man who leaps tall buildings in a single bound, a woman in love with her best friend's brother. If it's so easy, how come writers agonize and despair over plot? Because they're not really agonizing over the plot, they're agonizing over the story. This proccess is commonly referred to as plotting because "story-ing" is a really awkward word.

Plots need a story in order to be told and stories need motivation and set-up and that's hard. Space aliens inhabit my doormat. How? Why? What happens when I step on the doormat? What do the aliens look like? The devil is in the details.

Plots require that things happen. Thus, the plot of "Boy Meets Girl" requires that a boy meets a girl. Secret Baby: A man doesn't know a former lover has had his baby. Marriage of Convenience: Two people get married for convenience. That's the easy part. The way these things happen distinguish your story from other stories with the exact same plot, and that's the hard part. What does that mean? It means But What Happens? It means, how does your story carry out the plot?

Let's say the plot of your story is the tried and true "Marriage of Convenience." In order to write a story with this plot, you need detail. Lots and lots of detail. Unfortunately, not just any detail will do. Picking just the right detail is hard work. And deciding how to present those details is even harder. (I did say plotting is hard work.)

Elementary, my Dear Watson:
Without changing the subject entirely, once you know the details of your story, you will have to decide how to convey them. How you do this depends on more than just the scenes in your story, things like characterization, theme, whether your story is a comic one or not, etc. In brief, you need to present the elements of your story in such a way that in each and every scene something new or additional is at stake. That said, onward because this is about plotting (arriving at the details of your story.)

For the sake of convenience, let's say a story "element" is more or less the equivilant of a scene.
The elements of your story require:
Motivation
Set-up - usually in a prior scene
Something at stake

Motivation, Set up and the Something at Stake Help Determine the Elements.
Absolutely, this is circular. Start with whatever seems easiest to you. If you start with a scene, such as your heroine goes shopping, this element needs motivation and set-up. If you start with a motivation such as your heroine needs clothes, then you need to establish why she needs clothes (set up). In order for the shopping scene to be exciting to read, there needs to be something at stake. Someone challenges her in some way, she trips over the hero, just as long as it's something.
Given sufficient set-up and motivation, anything can happen. Absolutely anything.

Motivation Defined:

This is the general principle you need to internalize.
I define motivation as the convincing reason for the things that happen in your story, and mostly for the stuff the characters do. This cannot be over-emphasized. If the motivation is not convincing, your story will suck. This is a bit of a chicken and egg thing. Does the motivation require a certain kind of character? Or does a certain kind of character require a specific motivation? The answer is - whatever works for you. Just make sure the character fits the motivation. Or that the motivation fits the character.
As I've said, motivation must be convincing and in order for that to be true, you should deconstruct the motivation. Get in there and get anal. Confront as many possibilities as you can think of.
What follows is explanation and example for the statement above. It's one way of arriving at a scene that has motivation.
Let's assume your handsome hero enters a marriage of convenience.

A Quick Definition of Convenience:
Just to keep things simple, let's define a marriage of convenience as a marriage wherein both hero and heroine get married because each thinks they will get something they want and that something is NOT love.

Back to Deconstructing Motivation:
Ok. Why does your handsome hero enter a marriage of convenience? There are a gazillion reasons why. He needs money. He loves someone else and thinks it doesn't matter who he marries. It's December 15 and he has to be married by Christmas in order to inherit his uncle's money. He's a good guy and wants to do someone else a favor. On and on. Choose whatever you want. But! It's more complicated than that. The motivation should be fully deconstructed so that you know who and what you're going to be writing about. Which way you approach this depends upon the kind of writer you are. Maybe you need to work more on the Who, or maybe Who doesn't need work it's the What. Maybe you adjust both. Just as long as the characters and motivations fit together.
Let's take the first possible motivation. Handsome Hero enters a marriage of convenience because he needs money. What does that tell you about your hero? On its face, the glaring answer is that he values money over love. So your story is about a man who values money over love. Oh. That doesn't work for you because your hero is a romantic? Then keep deconstructing. Why would a romantic man marry for convenience instead of love? List the possibilities, deconstruct them, find a situation that allows you have a romantic hero marry for convenience instead of love. Keep going until you are satisfied the motivation is rock solid.

But Wait! There's More!
Handsome Hero's motivation for a marriage of convenience implies something about the woman he will marry, primarily that she, too, values something more than love, otherwise, she wouldn't marry for convenience. Deconstruct the heroine and her motivations. What is that something? Safety? Companionship? Children? Social Status? Pity? Please don't let it be stupidity. Sorry, but plotting is hard work.

A Brief Digression on TSTL:
TSTL means "To Stupid To Live" A character is TSTL only when the writer has not provided sufficient motivation and set up for her (or his) actions.

Back to But Wait! There's More!
The heroine's motivation for a marriage of convenience implies something about the man she will marry. (Hopefully, this sounds familiar.) Let's say the heroine's motivation for a marriage of convenience is that icky Cousin Fred is after her money. (Yes, you must give Cousin Fred motivation for wanting her money.) Therefore, the heroine must reasonably believe that Handsome Hero can protect her from icky Cousin Fred, who, by the way, wouldn't mind stooping to murder to get what he wants.

Your assignment:
Examine your hero's motivations for what he does. Deconstruct his motivations and make sure each element is convincing.

Extra Credit:
Do the same thing with the rest of your characters.

Squeezing it all in!

No- I'm not talking about your tummy as you try to zip up your favorite jeans or about the large piece of chocolate cake you just can't seem to get enough of!

With the holidays here it's been tricky to get any writing in. {That's an under statement.} Though, I will proudly state that I am trying to squeeze some in here and there. Trying.

What about you? You taking the holiday season off or are you squeezing it in, like me? Or- do the holidays not phase you one bit- you can ignore all the temptations and focus on your writing?

Critiquing is FUN!

Tonight- I had the wonderful opportunity to read the first 9 chapters of April Enders first completed novel. This was the first time I've had the chance to read another writers work before publication. It was a thrill and a pleasure. I don't belong to any support or critique group myself but if participating online is as close to anything I can hope for -then this was pretty good.

April Enders hasn't been published as of yet, but after reading some of her novel, I can safely assume she will be soon. Now, I'm no professional...as everyone knows- but it was a great read and practically flawless. Great job, April! Thanks for sharing it with me.

5 things {Tagged by Tristi}

Five Things Found in My Room:
{1} My two scrapbook tables/sewing stuff. And shelves that occupy these materials. {2} One giant stack of books I have already read. I just added the novel "Of Goodly Parents" by Heather B. Moore to the top of this stack.
{3} A large framed photo of my wedding day- Warren and I standing in front of the beautiful Salt Lake Temple. {4} An arch way to my large master bathroom/ walk-in closet...which I LOVE! {5} An unmade King size bed.

Five Things I've Always Wanted to Do:
{1} Play the Piano {2} Go sky diving {3} Travel to every LDS Temple
{4} Sing well {5} Meet Mother Eve.

Five Things Found in My Bag:
{1} A small bag of baby boy confetti from a baby shower I hosted. {2} 2 pair of craft scissors...YIKES! {3} My make-up case. {4} Book I'm reading: " The Invisible Saint" by Curtis Taylor {5} Diaper and wipes.

Five Things Found in My Wallet:
{1} No cash... only pennies! {2} My faded driver's license. {3} Library card that I owe money on, I'm sure. {4} My miniture Patriarchal Blessing. {5} My temple recommend

Five Things I'm Currently Into:
{1} Taking care of 5 children night and day. {2} Writing my first novel. {3} Preparing some geneolgy names with my mother for temple work. {4} Scrapbooking {5} Working out/ trying to loose weight.

I will tag...hmmmm....

April and Don {Jonly}

Six random thoughts...

Stephanie Humphreys shared six thoughts about herself on her blog, which were fantastic. Since I've been avoiding my deep cleaning this Saturday afternoon like the plague- I'm thrilled to share six random thoughts Autumn Ables has right now...

{1} Last night my husband and I went on a group date to dinner with two other couples in our ward. A much needed getaway since my week has been long, hard and an emotional roller coaster. While we were anxiously awaiting our meals at the restaurant- one of the men in our group made a couple of inappropriate sexual comments that I personally didn't care for. Of course, I didn't keep quiet {I never do...to my demise} and said something. He proceeded to tell me that I just needed to be more secure in my womanhood and not be so jealous at such comments said about other women. I replied that I've never been comfortable and secure in my womanhood. That was the end. Though I got to thinking about it later... Isn't it because men {or women} making such comments in actuality who bring down a woman's self esteem? Yes. I believe so. Really, I don't think it's a matter of feeling secure or insecure in my womanhood at all. I think it's a matter of respecting me as a woman- including all women- and in turn that is what will lift a woman's self esteem and confidence in her womanhood.

{2} I host a weekly Book of Mormon study group in my home with several women friends. Permission has been given from my Bishop because we follow the Institute study manual to the T. There's no 'The gospel according to so and so'. I've learned many things so far from a spiritual aspect as well as many personal insights. Some have been great lessons that I've learned quickly others have been hard and I've fought every step of the way. Pride. That's what it boils down to. I have too much pride. I dislike this quality about myself- but through Heavenly Father I know I'm getting better.

{3} Right now, I am a mother if 5 children. My oldest is 10 1/2 and my youngest will be 2 in March. On a daily basis I have to help, love, care for and discipline these short people. It is the hardest thing I've ever had to do in all my life. As a parent you have to be in tune with every child because not all the same techniques work for all of them. Sometimes, even the techniques you thought were working fine- suddenly seem to change. I feel like I am constantly reinventing motherhood in order do the proper job. It's been a fun ride--but boy is it extremely exhausting! Today is one of those days I feel exhausted. Thankfully, my hubby has a week vacation starting this weekend. Oh, the plans I have! Does he realize this? No.

{4} I love movies- at the very moment I am watching "Ice Princess" with my Princess. Since my seven year old daughter and I are the only two girls in our home amongst 5 testosterone glazed males- we are enjoying our girly moment. On commercials I am typing this.

{5} One of my pet peeves is that I can't stand it when someone brushes their teeth in front of me. The sound makes me cringe and my teeth hurt. I can brush my own teeth with no worries- but to hear others....OUCH.

{6} The influence we have on others is unsurpassed by any other opportunity we can come across. For me, in my life right now, it is being a mother, a wife, a friend, calling/service at church, helping at the kids school, being kind to those who are at the grocery store, being an example to those I come in contact with daily and now a writer. Oh, the pressure! I have come to realize in my 32 years of life that a smile, a soft touch, a happy spirit and service to others is the only way I can be happy. Because it makes others happy.

Bella has been cast!

Bella Swan- the leading character in Stephenie Meyer's "Twilight" series- has been officially cast for the movie! The official start date for filming is February 2008. I'm so excited :)

Read the details I posted on my personal blog here.

For Don...I mean Jonly:

I don't think I've laughed THIS hard in so long Don. This is for you...watch it and enjoy!

Jonly Bonly

Just for FUN:

Yes! I have two votes for my choice in a pen name! {See my last post } Well, it really should be my mother rejoicing- but I am too. Autumn Ables it is. Especially since Don decided to Google me and found out that I am THE Autumn Ables. Very cool to know!

Ok...so now that we aren't sick and tired of playing blogger/tagging games ;0...I think I'll do something fun myself. {JUST FOR FUN!!!}
So here ya go Don and Stephanie. This is for you!


Don and Stephanie are my blogger friends and unpublished writers such as myself- {hopefully not for long} and they need a push in deciding what exciting, amazing or catchy names to use for a 'pen name'. I am going to throw out a few names I would pick for them. If you have a suggestion...bring it on. But, reguardless I want some votes here:



Stephanie:



1} S. Humphreys



2} Canada Humphreys



3} Mitzi Humphreys



4} Stephie Alberta



5} S. Alberta



Don:

1} Don Rhonda {hehe- a joke}

2} D. D. Carey {Deluded Don Carey}

3} D. Carey

4} Don Jonly

5} D.C. Jonly

6} Donald Jonly {Don's idea}

What's in a name?

Everything. I can't imagine my name being Beulah and being taken seriously.

Do you like your name?

Do I like my name? Yes, as a matter of fact, I do like my name Autumn. When I was young...er the name Autumn was not all that popular. Well, it still isn't but it's raising in it's popularity- depending on what part of the United States/World you live in. I didn't have to worry about being the 3rd Jennifer in my 4th grade class or being mistaken for "Which Autumn are you talking about?" I felt unique and special in my own little name world. Children and male adults {who apparently thought they were still a teenager} would often poke fun and call me Winter, Summer, Fall or Spring. How original. Another name I was called quite often was Autumn of Green Gables. I did think that was cute simply because I love the Anne of Green Gables movies. Though, I was ALWAYS called by a different name on accident: Amber, April, Heather or Dawn. That would make me so mad! Thankfully, I am used to it now. And yes, these four names are continued to be used instead of Autumn...that is until I correct.

As a writer you can choose your legal birth name or a pen name. A pen name sounds so romantic doesn't it? You can change your identity in a snap if you'd like. How many professions can you do that with besides being a stripper? haha hehehe Okay, bad joke but you get my drift.

J.K. Rowling decided to use her initials in hopes that boys would not be turned off by a female author. A good trick I think- if your trying to write for all children. And the stories go on and on with why writers choose their claim to fame with their name.

Personally, I gave my 'pen name' quite a bit of thought, time and energy as I slashed through my mind, keyboard or paper with the many options I had on several occasions. What did I come up with? Me. I am me.
Well, sort of. Autumn is my birth name, of course. Ables is also my birth name aka- maiden name. Autumn Ables just flows. I love it. Thank you, Mother.

I asked permission from my hubby of 13 years if this was alright. My plea was that I wanted my name to flow as it once did { I hate my married name} and that I think it would be wise to use a name that suites paper, ears and tongues alike. He had no arguments and was fine with my proposal. Then he saw my work with Autumn Ables written out and was a little put off. He was joking but I think he'd really rather me go by my official married name if he had his druthers. I know- and you know- this has absolutely nothing to do with how I feel about my husband or my undying love for him...but does he? Well, he'll get over it! I am sorry but Autumn Weber doesn't flow like Autumn Ables. And for you Utah folks...Weber isn't pronounced as your Weber State College is. It is pronounced Webber. Why are there not 2 B's in my last name to clear up the distinction? Your guess is as good as mine. See...another reason to ditch Weber and go with Ables!

Hope

I have a renewed hope in myself and more confidence to complete my goal of continuing my writing and finishing of my first novel. Thanks to many of my readers and blogger friends- I have been buoyed up!

A few days ago I was pouting, feeling sad, and very sorry for myself... but I'm happy to say I feel much better now that I've received the much needed strength and support I desperately reached for. Thank you all for your kind words and uplifting sentiments.

May I be there when you need it the most. - Autumn

My writing

The novel I have chosen to write has been swirling in my head for quite some time. I've written here and there on this novel and even sidetracked to write two children's books. I've made decent progress thus far... 19,172 words so far. But you see, I feel like I'm fooling myself and everyone else who knows I'm writing a novel! I'm not a "writer". I've never dreamed of writing, I've never been an avid reader except for the past couple of years. I'm not qualified in any way to be doing this sort of thing! I have no degree, even though I went to college. Though, I will admit that I feel inspired and urged to do this project. Why? I have no clue. I just know that what I am writing about is of value, of worth and will touch someones life- someday.

You see- I want this novel to be perfect. Yes, unfortunately, I am a perfectionist in many areas of my life. I know this sounds typical and maybe it is, but, I'd like to write as perfectly as I feel or see the characters, the plot or scenery. Since I can't always do this I refrain from the keyboard and continue allowing my story to just swirl in my head. I just assume that when the right words or perfect phrase or divine description of what I feel or see in my head will show up as bubble over my head and then it will be time to write it down.

What I've written so far is good. Some of it is great. I'm happy for the most part with where I'm headed. I feel like I'm on the side of a mountain trying to make my way to the top but have lost my energy or knowledge to continue.

I guess what I'm saying is I'm frustrated with myself with my imperfections and lack of whatever is lacking. I need to do this, I'm suppose to do this. But it's HARD and I'm so scared!

Top 10

Reasons to be a Writer:
by Janette Rallison

{1} Librarians think you're cool.

{2} You have an excuse to be cluttered: you have no time for cleaning; you're creating ART.

{3} You get a collection of stories you'll always enjoy reading because you wrote them.

{4} If you publish, you don't have to think about what you'll get your friends and family for Christmas—they're all getting your book!

{5} You can name your characters all the things your husband wouldn't let you name your children.

{6} You can work in your pajamas.

{7} You get to network with other writers.


{8} Money and fame. Ha! Ha! But I just had to throw that one in.


{9} You can pattern your villains after the guys who dumped you in high school, and


{10} You don't have bad days; you just have more writing material to draw from!

Autumn Ables 101

As a tag game that I'm playing along with, (Thanks to Tristi :) I'd like to share classes that I offer. I am in the midst of conquering such topics personally - so I'm confident I could be a valuable teacher. But, please don't hold back your comments or suggestions- it can never hurt to see another point of view... especially when the instructor has yet to master the below said classes.

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How to keep your mouth shut- 101:

Have you ever put your foot in your mouth-- repeatedly? If so, I have a good tip...add salt or sugar next time, maybe you will enjoy the taste better.

If there was ever a woman alive who has done this more then any -it would be ME. You'd think I'd have learned my lesson yet.

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How to bake Humble Pie- 101:

Do you think you know everything--all the time? Then you find out that you really don't? If so...this class is really what you are looking for.

I've had to personally bake humble pie so many times I know the recipe by heart. It can be a good thing to know a recipe by heart- but maybe not so much with this particular pie. You see, it costs a lot to make and it is very taxing. You'd think I'd have learned my lesson yet.

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How to choose your food choices wisely- 101:

Do you find yourself over weight? Maybe it's because of poor food choices- or lack of proper and consistent exercise? If so, this course is for you.

At the age of 32 I'm not looking as healthy as I should. Sure, I whine and cry--but do I work at it faithfully? Well, no. Recently- YES. I go bike riding 3 times a week and I'm trying to choose better on what goes into my body. It's one of the hardest things to work on. You'd think I'd have learned my lesson yet.

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How to become as patient as Job- 101:

Do you find yourself getting overly anxious when things don't go your way? Do you snip at your family members as they look upon you with innocent eyes? Do you raise your voice in the heat of a conversation you are having that isn't going the way you planned- when you should be raising your voice in song? Do you growl at your children when they piss you off to no end? If so- this class is definitely something you should---no WILL take.

Do I need to describe any farther? You'd think I'd have learned my lesson yet.

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How to become and stay organized- 101:

Is your life in utter chaos? Do you find that the things that should be organized aren't... even down to your wallet? Is your closets piled with who knows what and you question how it got there? Do you 'own' more then one junk drawer, dresser or closet? If so- this class is geared towards decluttering your life and home. Hang out with me and Tristi as we show off all the things NOT to do in order to better your organizational skills.

I will never be this way- never have- never will! I hate it. I despise it. I organize and reorganize a lot. Does it STAY this way? NO! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
You'd think I'd have learned my lesson yet.

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How to be a loving and supportive wife- 101:

Do you find that you want to strangle, suffocate or hit upside the head of your dear husband? Do you have list after list of items that need to be done but they seem to be ignored? Do you like to pick a fight with your hubby for kicks? Do you ever look at your husband and wonder what in the heck are you thinking? I already know your answers to these questions- so join me as we complete this course with flying colors. You'd think I'd have learned my lesson yet.

I adore my sweet husband, Warren. I think he has a pretty awesome wife too. Do I want to kill him half the time? YES! Probably because as he says it so bluntly with a smile to me: "Autumn, you think this is your world and we all just have to live in it."

What? Me? hahahaha He's RIGHT on!

You'd think I'd have learned my lesson yet.

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For those brave enough to admit the classes you need to work on or teach...well I'm not asking, I'm pointing fingers! You're tagged:

Stephanie Humphreys~

Paulette ~

W.L. Elliott ~

Don ~

Josi Kilpack ~

*****You 5 lucky players, don't forget to add me to one of your classes you think I'd be good at taking! I added Trsiti as a co-instructor in my organization class.

Words of Wisdom

• Substitute "damn" every time you're inclined to write "very;" your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be. ~Mark Twain

• And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. ~Sylvia Plath
  
  

• I try to leave out the parts that people skip. ~Elmore Leonard

• If there's a book you really want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it. ~Toni Morrison

• The time to begin writing an article is when you have finished it to your satisfaction. By that time you begin to clearly and logically perceive what it is you really want to say. ~Mark Twain

• Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass. ~Anton Chekhov

Aussie Terms

Australians have more colourful expressions. So try this little quiz ... match up the terms below and their meanings:

shonky, chook, lob, fair dinkum, she'll be right, cozzie, deadset, ridgy didge, fair go, rip snorter

1. a chicken

2. swimming suit

3. boast, brag

4. true, the truth

5. dubious, underhanded

6. a chance

7. drop in to see someone

8. original, genuine

9. great, fantastic

10. it'll turn out okay

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AUSSIE TERMS ANSWERS:

1. Chook: a chicken

2. Cozzie: swimming costume

3. Shonky: dubious, underhanded e.g. a shonky practice, shonky business etc.

4. Deadset: true, the truth

5. Fair dinkum: true, genuine

6. Fair go: a chance ("give a bloke a fair go")

7. Lob, lob in: drop in to see someone ("the rellies have lobbed")

8. Ridgy-didge: original, genuine

9. Rip snorter: great, fantastic - "it was a rip snorter of a party"

10. She'll be right: it'll turn out okay

Got Funnies?

• There was once a young man who, in his youth, professed his desire to become a great writer.When asked to define great, he said, "I want to write stuff that the whole world will read, stuff that people will react to on a truly emotional level, stuff that will make them scream, cry, howl in pain and anger!" He now works for Microsoft writing error messages.
  
  
• A screen writer comes home to a burned down house. His sobbing and slightly-singed wife is standing outside. “What happened, honey?” the man asks.“Oh, John, it was terrible,” she weeps. “I was cooking, the phone rang. It was your agent. Because I was on the phone, I didn’t notice the stove was on fire. It went up in second. Everything is gone. I nearly didn’t make it out of the house. Poor Fluffy is--”“Wait, wait. Back up a minute,” The man says. “My agent called?”

• A writer died and was given the option of going to heaven or hell.
  She decided to check out each place first. As the writer descended into the fiery pits, she saw row upon row of writers chained to their desks in a steaming sweatshop. As they worked, they were repeatedly whipped with thorny lashes.
  "Oh my," said the writer. "Let me see heaven now."A few moments later, as she ascended into heaven, she saw rows of writers, chained to their desks in a steaming sweatshop. As they worked, they, too, were whipped with thorny lashes."Wait a minute," said the writer. "This is just as bad as hell!" "Oh no, it's not," replied an unseen voice. "Here, your work gets published."

W. B.

Writer's Block: A Definition by Example
by Michael Bracken

Writer's Block is...

The author acknowledges his inability to complete this paper due to--

• a "dearth of ideas, a state of self-dissatisfaction, and an inability to organize" (Polking 434);
  

• "knows something is wrong, but can't identify it" because he has reached a "technical impasse" (Banks) and is experiencing "a time when the words just won't come together" (Vialle);
  

• he once received "thoughtless" and "insensitive" criticism and is unable to maintain the fragile balance between "motivation and enthusiasm in the face of continued self-doubt and self-criticism" (Ballon);
  

• self-conscious about the writing situation because he has failed to do any "preliminary work such as brainstorming or outlining" (Purdue University);
  

• feels "pressure to be brilliant in the first try" (Wiesner) and "fear of failure, self doubt, and depression [have] become heavy loads" (Rosenbaum 142);
  

• has no established schedule for writing and "writes only when the muse strikes" (Reid), yet has only this one project to work on and can think of nothing else (Banks);
  

• has conflicted feelings, wanting "the writing to be perfect" and wanting "the damned thing done as soon as possible" (University of Illinois), yet fears deadlines and plans to postpone working on this paper until the last possible moment;
  

• fears that he lacks original ideas but can't stand to "write down an idea until it is perfectly worded" (Purdue University) and this stifles his creativity;
  has no imagination, has not been inspired and, because he believes everything he writes is drivel, he worries heavily "about what [his] instructor or other reader[s] will think of [his] paper" (Purdue University);
  

• fears that to be "original, insightful, profound, [and] funny … requires some mental digging" that he finds "uncomfortable" and because he knows that "writing something down [is] exposing a part of [himself] in an exceptionally public way," fears that what he writes is "unprofound, unfunny, uninsightful, and uninteresting and that putting [his] name to it is signing a confession to [his] un-ness" (Pelt);
  

• is having difficulty with the assignment because it is "restrictive" (Bly);
  has become "stuck" (Vialle) and can't think of anything to write and the more he worries about writer's block, the more "he fear[s] its sudden onset" (Rosenbaum 144) and so always stops to look up words, spending endless time thumbing through dictionaries and thesauruses seeking the perfect word instead of actually writing (Guilford College);
  

• is upset by "something [that] happened earlier in the day" (Guilford College) and is so preoccupied by that event that he has "thinker's cramp" (Poynter 176) and is unable to recognize the multitude of "excuses" (Schell 304) he has for not writing; and, because he has "psychological problems" (Guilford) "entirely unrelated to writing" (Polking 434) and is "lazy" (Belkom), he has decided that "it's more fun to rest on the laurel" of having published once than to back up his claim of being a writer by creating new work (Belkom).

Even so, the author believes that writer's block "never happens" (Perret 84) to professional writers and is a "cop-out" which professional writers never use because "You write, you eat. You don't write, you find another job" (Belkom).

Naming your characters-

The names of your characters matter.

You want the conscious and subconscious effect working for you with names. Use names that are appropriate to your time period. No matter how much you personally like a name, if it's not right for your story, don't use it.

Some Preliminary Observations...

These are not rules. These are just some observations I've made and conclusions I've come to. The names of your characters matter. With Historical Romance in particular, I think it's getting harder and harder to find good names. There are so many "Lord Something-ham's" out there that certain name forms are starting to sound trite and shallow, and once a name sounds trite and shallow that effect transfers to the character.

You need a name that sounds English, sounds cool and even reads cool. That is, you must consider how the name looks on the page, how it sounds in your head and how it sounds if said out loud. All three count.

A Rose is a Rose is a Rose, right?

Well, no. We all know names shouldn't matter, but they do. Your characters need to have names that suit them and your story. Some stuff is obvious; don't give your characters names that weren't used in your time period.

Other things are less obvious, such as even if you've confirmed a name was used in your time period, don't use it if it sounds modern. Maybe Tiffany was a name used in the Regency (I doubt it, but maybe). But even if so, Tiffany sounds modern. It's great if you can find a name that lends itself to a good nickname, too.

Broader considerations:

Try not to have characters whose names start with the same letter or sounds. Why? Because readers do not have your investment in the story. Particularly at the beginning, your readers have no idea who's who. They're going to have a hard time keeping track if you throw a lot of names at them, let alone ask them to remember that John is your hero, James is his best friend, and the butler is Jones.

A Few Things that Bug Me about Names in Historical Romance:

One thing that really bugs me is the use of actual titles. There was a duke of Portland, people, so if you give your hero the title of the earl of Portland, it's going to seem like you didn't work very hard when naming your character. The point is that the names of your characters should not confuse your readers or give them pause. As in "The earl of Portland? Doesn't she know there's a Duke of Portland?" Clunk. Your reader is out of the story.

Names that are becoming trite: Common english suffixes such as:
-ham
-sham
-land
-ton
St. [anything]

HOMEWORK:

Make a list of the names of all your characters and try to give them all distinctive names.

{by Carolyn Jewel}

Location, Location, Location

Ouch! How did that desk get there?

When you write a scene, you need to know where stuff is. (That doesn't mean you have to tell the reader.) Why, you say? One really good reason is you'll have some effective props you can use while you're writing. Another is your scene won't have that empty feeling.

Let's say your wealthy and titled hero is sitting in his office. Hmm. There ought to be a desk and a chair for him to sit on. What else? Windows? Rugs? Paintings? Fireplace? Other chairs? Any tables? What color are the walls? If you've done your research, including reading about architecture and furniture, you know the answer to a lot of those questions. You can pick some authentic item and have the hero or heroine, who's going to come in any minute now, use it.

OK. There are three chairs, you've decided. When the heroine comes in, which one does she sit on? The choice might be instructive. If you don't have these details in mind when you're writing, you'll probably never think of using the choice. She'll just come in and sit when invited. Your reader will not be thinking, hmm, how interesting that he asked her to sit there...

How come nobody bumped into a desk yet?

What if you haven't really thought about what's in the room? You just say the hero is sitting in his office because that's a manly thing for him to do. The heroine comes in. They converse, things get heated and they passionately embrace. Hey! says the reader, who is not stupid, and is therefore thinking office, desk, chair. How come no one bumped into the desk? Or worse, he has the absurd picture of your couple reaching for each other over the expanse of the desk, their lips barely able to touch.

Assignment:

This isn't hard at all. Find a passage in your WIP with people in it. Imagine details about the things around them and then use a couple of them. Send me a quarter if, when you finish, your scene has drastically changed.
{by Carolyn Jewel}

Rewrite?

Why You Must Rewrite
{by Carolyn Jewel}

Because you won't get published if you don't. OK. OK. Because fiction writing is an act of the subconscious consciously crafted into art. Put another way, let your innards tell your outards where you ought to go. Here's an example of what I mean:

You have the following dream: all your teeth fall out. You weep with distress. Other people, some of them specific people, stare at you with distaste.

First, put your mind at ease, you wake up and all your teeth are exactly where they were when you went to sleep. So, this dream is your subconscious telling you something, but being your subconscious, it doesn't come right out and say (something like) Hey, Carolyn! You're so worried about what other people think you're freaking out! The meaning of this dream will, of course, be different for everyone, but the whole thing's a waste of a REM cycle if you don't consciously think about what it means to you.

Professor Plum in the Conservatory!

It works this way with a first draft, too. A first draft contains clues to where you ought to go. Your outline, synopsis, character sketches, chronologies, etcetera are the elements your subconscious is mining while you're writing that first draft. You are not yet aware of the stronger theme lurking in the background. You haven't yet admitted that your heroine is really a Very Nice Person because your synopsis calls for a sassy flirt and by golly, you're sticking with it! More sass please!

Oh. Colonel Mustard In the Kitchen?

Here's what happens when you don't listen for the clues: You have 500 pages of MS that follow your outline to the letter. You have a truly sassy flirt for a heroine and the whole darn thing makes a nice doorstop because your hero just isn't the kind of guy who goes for sassy flirts. He prefers a Really Nice Person.

So Who's Running The Show?

Your characters. With careful and attentive rewriting you bring out all the stuff your subconscious was telling you about the people in your story. Adjust to that, and your characters will become more and more realistic and pretty soon, they are real.

How To Find the Clues

Like this: You're reading your first draft. Yup, sassy heroine. Good. Exactly what your character background tells us she is. Everything's fine because this is what the outline said should happen right here. Hey, you say to yourself as you read the next part, Geneva's a really nice person. Gee, too bad. That's not in her character background and it's certainly not in the outline. So, do you rewrite this part and make her sassier? No. Why not? Because this is a CLUE!
Why is this a clue? Because right there you were thinking about Geneva the person. Not Geneva the character. And that, my friend, is the kind of writing that gets you published.

I've Got a Clue. Now What?

First, you trust yourself. Geneva is not just a sassy flirt. She's a really nice person. You must explore what this means for your story. The outline calls for a scene where Geneva acts like a sassy flirt with the hero. But, as you've just learned, Geneva is a really nice person. What you need instead is a scene where Geneva is really nice to the hero.

Ouch. That Hurts

Now you must wield the writer's scalpel. You must rewrite. You must cut the scene where Geneva is being a sassy flirt. Probably all of it. 2000 words gone, possibly more. In fact, you probably have to rewrite everything you've written so far in order to accommodate the truth: Geneva is a nice person. 50,000 words gone. If this is daunting, and it is, think in smaller chunks. Think, opening. Fix the opening. The reward is awesome. (Royalty checks!) Plus rewriting the middle is easier after you've just made the opening so much better.

Round Pegs. Square Holes

Don't stress because you're not following the outline. You conceived your story (and perhaps wrote an outline) before your characters were fully realized. You'll have a much easier time if you adapt your story to the characters you're discovering. Otherwise, you'll just keep trying to fit your characters into a story doesn't belong to them. The characters are round pegs. Your story is a square hole. Creating real characters is hard, it's voodoo and magic and so extremely delicate that it's better to change the shape of the hole.

Finish line:

I was trailing behind so many a day- yet I could see the red tape I needed to cross in the distance. My perseverance couldn't be stumped, though my running could. The tape in view came closer and closer...I began running harder and harder. Just before I could hit my high speed I tripped and fell- but got up once again to finish the race. The moment I flew across the white chalk line, from the corner of my eye I saw the red tape already on the ground from another runner, I felt joyous and courageous because, afterall, I persevered despite all my falls.

On September 11, 2007 I began a BIAM challenge. {Book In A Month} It ended just an hour ago for me. Did I come in first with the highest numbers? No. But I did run the race and I feel like I've accomplished so much! My word total for my novel in this month is: 19,027. Not bad...not bad at all.

Back in the saddle again...

I'm back from our relaxing getaway...now it's back in the saddle again!

Whenever I plan for a weekend getaway or extended vacation I can hardly wait to go, go, go. Once it's time to return back home... it's so, so, so nice to come to the place I was anxious to leave! 'Home Sweet Home'.

I have 2 more days of the BIAM challenge. {Holy Cow! This past month went by fast.} I'm far from completing my entire novel during this past month- but I've made wonderful progress. I'm thrilled to be apart of Tristi's challenge. Today, I will be hacking away on my keyboard adding to my novel. Though, most of the work won't get done until tonight when little ones sleep.

Good luck to those fellow BIAM challenge participants! GO, GO, GO!

auf Wiedersehen {goodbye}

This morning our family is making the final preparations for our weekend getaway. We are thrilled to get out of dodge!! A couple hours from now we are driving up north to the White Mountains near the Show Low, Arizona area. My husband- Warren-grew up on a very large ranch near there and we enjoy visiting and hanging out at least once a year. All of Warren's immediate family are long gone- and only a few remnants of extended family live on the ranch. Still, it is a place of retreat because there is a furnished common 'rec center' that is for all family members to use. This is where we will be staying. We are bringing our friends, The Eatons, with us. They have 6 children and we have 5. The rec center is large enough to fit all 15 of us comfortably.


Also, this weekend is 'General Conference' - a most wonderful time of year! We are members of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day saints - aka LDS or Mormon. If you are not an LDS reader what this means: {thanks to Josi for the perfect definition!} A semi-annual conference for all members of our church. At this time the leaders of our church give talks about doctrine, current issues, scriptures etc. It is broken up into two hour segments, with two segments on Saturday and two on Sunday. The conferences are televised world wide. The fall conference is this weekend, October 6 & 7 and because of that we don't attend our regular church meetings.


We are packing one of our T.V.'s and DVD players from home in order to watch conference and movies this weekend since the rec center doesn't have one. The ranch is nestled on many acres where children can roam free as the wind. Also, there are a few 4 wheelers to ride, a zip line and a large covered BBQ pit with wood tables and benches. My friend Paulette and I will be towing our scrapbook stuff as well to play with while we watch/listen to conference.

I hope you have an exciting and happy weekend too! Until next time...auf Wiedersehen. {goodbye}

Hilarious!

I laughed and laughed and laughed....
Watch this:

Pachebel Bedtime

Advice from a 13 year old...

I have told a few people about my book. Those I've trusted my story with have given their opinions and I try to take them into consideration. {Most of the time} I think that it's good to get another point of view on such matters. When it's all said and done, once your book published that is, there's NO going back. So it's gotta be GREAT.

One of my dear friends has a 13 year old daughter that I get my advice and most support from. Since my book will be geared toward teen and young adult girls...this is a GOOD thing. I am please to announce that this 13 year old girl LOVES my work- so far anyway. I feel flattered and take her advice to heart. Afterall, she is the one who would really know.

Advice from a 13 year old? In this instance I 'm glad!

Words...just words

Today's writing seemed...well bland. Words...just words. No flare. Just filler-inners. {If that's a word?!} I needed to add some back history to my plots. Blah...blah..blah...

So I'm giving you something FUN... a 6 minute and 32 second break if you're interested. Here is one of my most favorite scenes in the movie "Seven Brides for Seven Brothers".

ENJOY!

LAUGHTER...still the BEST medicine.

Paulette suggested I check out something super funny on W.L. Elliott's blog. I did...and I'm so glad! Thanks Paulette and Wendy! I needed that laugh :)


Click the link below to view:
{WARNING: A few crude remarks...if you're sensitive to that}

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zo1XFz0kac0

Total: 000

The past 2 days I haven't even wrote one word in my novel. My head is hanging low-I feel ashamed.

Yes, I'm a mommy of 5 and have lots of things on my plate and way too many projects to finish for my own good...but if I really wanted to make time to write these last 2 days I could have managed. I don't think I'm in a stump or anything- I just think it's pure laziness. My attention has been elsewhere.

So, tonight after the surprise party that I'm hosting for one of my good friends {and kids are asleep} I plan on working on my novel. Any PROGRESS is the key- even if it's little.

Have a wonderful Saturday!

The domino effect IIIIIII/////////////////_ _ _ _ _

For the most part I have my main plots and several sub-plots all figured out. I've discovered the one awesome thing about being a writer is that YOU can change whatever you want...whenever you want! SO COOL!

Nothing drastic {so I thought} did I change in my main plot- but because I made that change I'm amazed at how I've caused a 'domino effect'. Several other things have to change too! It's all good though. I'm much happier with the changes made.

Have you ever had this experience?

About me

Along with this blog- I maintain a more personal blog. If you want to know more about me...here is the link:

http://queenofchaosandjoy.blogspot.com/

Baked Potato Soup

I LOVE potatoes! One of my favorite dishes to make is Baked Potato Soup. I have followed many recipes over the years but I have adapted and refined what I love.

I 'm headed to the grocery store tonight to purchase the ingredients for this soup because I will be making it on Thursday for my Book of Mormon study and craft group. I host this once a week activity with several ladies. Since it is a potluck as well- I put myself in charge of the 'main dish' and my friends bring the side dishes and desserts.

Since I had to pull up my recipe anyway I thought I'd share it...

Ajoy's Baked Potato Soup

* 7-8 peeled & chopped potatoes {big chunks}

* 3 tablespoons butter

* 4 cups chicken stock or 1 family size can of Cream of Chicken Soup {add an extra cup of water or milk if you choose the cream chicken soup}

* 4 cups water

* 1/4 cup cornstarch

* 1 teaspoon salt

* 3/4 teaspoon ground black pepper

* 1/2 teaspoon dried basil

* 1/8 teaspoon dried thyme

* 1 teaspoons season salt

* 2 teaspoons dill

* 1 clove garlic {minced}

* 1 cup half-and-half

* 1 cup shredded cheese

* 8 ounces bacon - cooked and crumbled

* 2 green onions, chopped

* 1 pkg. Cream Cheese

* Sour cream

Put all ingredients into your crock pot. {except 1/4 of the bacon, 1/2 of the chopped green onions and 1/2 of the shredded cheese and cornstarch.}

Turn on HIGH for several hours.

Once it is nearly done...take several spoons of the soup liquid in a bowl- add cornstarch and mix together. Add back into the crock pot to thicken.

Once it's done...serve in individual bowls-topped with a dollop of sour cream, a few bacon bits, some shredded cheese and a sprinkle of chopped green onions. Salt to your taste.

Middle name meme

To my surprise, and demise, I was tagged by Miss Josie Kilpack with the middle name meme. I will confess, I 'm so grateful my middle name is short! It took me a few days to come up with something that was descriptive and accurate about me...yet confined to 3 specific letters. YIKES! I dragged my hubby into the brainstorming.

Below is what we came up with:

JOY

J: Jolly

I love to laugh, joke, be silly and have a good time.


O: Open

I like to be open with myself towards others. Such as my past, ideas or opinions. Yes, I have been hurt because of it. Yet... I still find that when I 'm more open and share about me- I can help others in more positive ways then not. I don't like feeling uncomfortable. Being more open I feel like I 'm helping others feel as comfortable as possible when they are around me.

Y: Young at heart

I’ve always heard elderly people say things like... “I may look old, but I don’t feel old”. Well, I’d like to think I 'm beginning to understand what they mean! Even though I’m not ‘old’ be any means-I 'm a mature woman in my early 30’s and I still feel very young at heart. It's a good feeling.



Now to pick on someone else!!! Drum roll please.......................

Stephanie Humphreys and Paulette

Good luck gals! teeheehee {yes, I'm actually laughing}
I look forward to reading what you have to say.

Bring your writing to life

To be the best writer I can- I have to gain confidence and advice from outside sources. One of many websites I view is " Carolyn Jewels' Writing Workshop". Here is a something worthy to pass on...

Ajoy

Bring your writing to life with strong verbs and specific nouns. What's that? Well, I'll give specific examples and show you exactly what I mean.

Strong Verbs

This subject relates to passivity and, as a general rule, passive = bad. For example, the verb "to be" is a weak verb. It lends so little imagery it needs a helper verb in order to convey what's happening.

The more specific you are, the better. If you're going to use a bird to help convey an image or feeling, use a specific bird. Don't say someone has puppy-eyes, say what kind of puppy.

Geneva was walking toward the well.

"was walking" tells us what Geneva was doing but not how she was doing it. You could start adding adjectives like "quickly" or whatever, but that's a cop out. One good strong verb takes care of the whole thing and gets the picture in the reader's head a lot more effectively. Replace "was walking" with a stronger verb: walk, race, plod, dash or whatever good strong image your scene requires.

Geneva plodded toward the well.

TIP: Quite often you'll find your strong verb disguised as an adverb, adjective or helper verb next to the weak verb. Take the example above: With "was walking" the stronger verb is "walk." It's not always so easy to find the strong verb, but since a weak verb often needs modifiers, any place where you've got lots of adjectives and adverbs is a good place to use a stronger verb.

Naturally, it's not always a matter of changing the verb and moving on. Sometimes you need to re-write the entire sentence or passage in order to effectively use the strong verb.

So, I should replace every weak verb with a strong one, right?

No!

If only it were so easy. Weak verbs have their virtues. A weak verb can pave the way for the strong verb coming up and give it more punch.

To Be: the Verb of Last Resort

Specificity: This subject also relates to passivity and, as a general rule, passive = bad. The more specific you are, the better. If you're going to use a bird to help convey an image or feeling, use a specific bird. Don't say someone has puppy-eyes, say what kind of puppy. Your specific choice makes a difference. Probably one example is enough:

The ball flew like a bird startled from a bush.
The ball flew like a grouse startled from a bush.
The ball flew like a finch startled from a bush.
The ball flew like a hawk startled from a bush.
The ball flew like a goose startled from a bush.

See what I mean? Each specific bird gives a slightly different image. Be specific.

Your assignment
Take a look at any chapter of your work-in-progress (WIP). Replace weak verbs with strong ones and replace generic nouns with specific ones.

This is why:

"To you women of today, who are old or young, may I suggest to you that you write, that you keep journals, that you express your thoughts on paper. Writing is a great discipline. It is a tremendous education effort. It will assist you in various ways, and you will bless the lives of many--now and in the years to come, as you put on paper some of your experiences and some of your musings." --President Gordon B. Hinckley

"You will have significant experiences. I hope that you will write them down and keep a record of them, that you will read them from time to time and refresh your memory of those meaningful and significant things. Some may be funny. Some may be significant only to you. Some of them may be sacred and quietly beautiful. Some may build one upon another until they represent a lifetime of special experience. Gordon B. Hinckley, 2006

TWILIGHT Series update:

Stephenie Meyer {Best Selling author of Twilight, New Moon and Eclipse} happens to be one of my good friends. I am so proud of her and the unexpected accomplishments and fame she has made in her writing.



As you may, or may not, know her books are being made in to movies. She is thrilled! And I am too!I am posting what she wrote about the progress made thus far:


"Things continue to move forward with Summit, and I couldn’t be more pleased. They have officially signed director Catherine Hardwicke and writer Melissa Rosenberg. I had a chance to sit down with Catherine and Melissa and many of the other people involved while I was in L.A. It was a fantastic conversation and they asked all the right questions—I even had a chance to mention a few of my favorite actors. I’m so excited to see what comes next, and I promise to keep you all in the loop when new things happen."

A sense of accomplishment

Yesterday was hard, to say the least. I was able to accomplish all I needed but flopped on my bed-purely exhausted- when my day was over.

Today is a new day. My baby boy is feeling great, I had the rest I need, and I've accomplished my crazy list from yesterday. Now... onto writing. yippeeee!

Major Ooooooops!

As if I didn't have enough on my plate yesterday...

I forgot to VOTE!!!! Can you believe it?
I should of went ahead with a mail in ballot- but thought I could make it to the polls.
Little did I know what yesterday would be like! grrrrrrr

{I pray Candace doesn't read this :S}

My first day of commiting to writing 3 hrs. in my novel:

Today is crazy!

Take kids to school.

Pick up kids from school.

Go back to pick up 10 yr. old son from football practice.

Take care of my very sick/feverish 17 mo. old baby boy.

Sew 12 paper bag albums for Enrichment tonight.

Call my sister is Seattle to congratulate her baby boy's birth.

Go to the store and buy glue sticks and tags.

Put together stuff for my class I'm teaching tonight at church.

Write for at least 3 hours.

Help kids with homework.

Read 2 chapters in Nephi to be ready for my Book of Mormon study group.

Reschedule my Dr. appt. I missed yesterday because of sick kids.

Take 6 yr. old daughter to buy 2 more shirts for her school uniform.

Take 8 yr. old son along shopping for a mouthpiece he's supposed to wear whenever he does anything active {even recess!} until he gets braces next fall.

Make dinner.

Help kids get their school stuff prepared for tomorrow.

Go to church early to set up- then teach the enrichment class to the sisters.

How is your day coming along?! I pray I make it through TODAY!

INSANE in the MEMBRANE

Tristi Pinkston's Book in a Month Challenge-

Rules:

1. We are starting on Monday, September 10th and will go until midnight on Tuesday, October 9th.

2. You can start a new book from scratch or continue working on one you have already started.

3. You need to set a goal for how much each day you will write, either time-wise or word count-wise.

4. No editing is to be done during this time! Just get in there and write, write, write! You can go back and edit at the end of the challenge. You may be surprised, though, how little you really need to change. There's something about getting into the flow and just doing it. I wrote one of my novels during an ANWA challenge and was sure it all stunk, but was pleasantly surprised to find it wasn't as bad as I thought.

5. Make a Work in Progress box in your sidebar to chart your progress. Go see mine for a template of the information that should be there.


Work in Progress:

'As we greet with a kiss'

Starting Date: 11 September 2007

Daily Goal: To write at least for 3 hours

So Far: 14,947 words

End Date: 9 October 2007

Profound Meaning

I stumbled upon anothers blog and read a comment. I have found this comment to be very profound to me. So I'd like to share! Thank you much Davis Bigelow~

"It seems to me that being passionate about something gives birth to a part of your soul that is not governed by monetary value. It is available for anyone who tries. It puts all of us human beings on equal grounds."

{PS} D.B. is having his novel " Three seconds on, Three seconds off" published - it looks so interesting! Here is his blog if you want to take a peek: http://davisbigelow.blogspot.com/

Passionate

I have so many ideas with my novel that I almost don't know what to write next! The advice I received from a good friend of mine and well known author- Stephenie Meyer- was that she never writes in sequence. She just writes wherever her heart desires and then she goes back and fills in. That way she's never stumped. I have implemented this technique in my personal writing style. I admit it is the perfect way to write.

I feel so passionate about all the ideas, topics, characters that I jump all over the place in my writing! Thank goodness I know what is what on my laptop. Someone reading my work at this point would be extremely confused!!!! I will call it 'organized chaos'.

I am having fun writing!

Ajoy

Acceptable behavior?

While writing more of my novel yesterday, I came to a part where two deeply caring friends were saying unnecessary goodbyes. Forever.

And I was balling like a baby! I was so wrapped up in the emotions of what I was conveying. Is that 'normal'? I am not sure. I am wise enough at this point as a writer to know that I need to be 'passionate' about what I write and be 'in tune'. But to ball like a baby...c'mon?!

I think that particular part in my novels' content has more emphasis because of my emotional status while writing. So I will count that as good thing. But that's not my question... I want to know if this is normal or even acceptable behaviour as a writer?!!! teehee Please say it is so!

Children's Books

As I have been writting my novel-I've had a mini completion in a sense. I have written 2 children's books! It's a nice break in my thinking to write something much more simplistic. Not that writing a children's book is easy, by an means! But, as I said, a nice break.

I have 5 children and so reading their age appropriate books is almost a daily occurance for me. As I read their books with them- or to them- the gears in my head seem to be constantly turning and spitting out ideas. Hence, my first 2 children's books were born. Also, I have 5 childrens' points of view to be my personal and honest critics...Aren't I the lucky writer?

THE FIRST BOOK I WROTE has to do with two brothers that are several years apart in age. The older brother is preparing to go on a mission for the church. The younger brother is very sad he will be loosing his best friend.

THE SECOND BOOK I WROTE is about a kid taking a snake to sacrement meeting.

I haven't tried to get them published yet. I need to though. I will...I will...my kids keep bugging me too!

Ajoy

Content

The fictional novel I am working on is coming along nicely. For the most part I am very pleased with what I've accomplished thus far.

Its content has many aspects: Pre-mortal life where my characters relationships blossom. Eternal choices and promises are made. Earth life of an ordinary young lady who discovers the thin veil between the life she has forgotten pre-mortally and her reality. Those related to her beyond the veil help her in mortal life in many unexpected ways. The veil between this world and Lucifer's lair is as thin as well. This young lady had to endure quite a lot from their side too. Of course, there's a lot more to it the story then I can explain now. I will say though- I feel that despite it being ' a first novel' I am doing genuine work. {Now let's wait and see what I have to say about this work years from now! hehehe}

It features a bit of everything: love, lust, mystery, life, death, sisterhood, friendship, dating,marriage, eternal and mortal family ties, personal disappointment and triumph.


My hope is to make those who read it to feel an array of emotions...

Acceptance • Affection • Ambivalence • Anger • Anticipation • Anxiety • Apathy • Bitterness • Boredom • Calmness • Compassion • Contempt • Contentment • Confusion •Courage• Delight • Depression •Desire • Despair • Disappointment • Disgust • Doubt • Ecstasy •Elation• Embarrassment • Emptiness • Enmity • Enthusiasm • Envy • Epiphany • Euphoria • Fear • Friendship • Frustration • Gladness • Gratification Gratitude • Grief • Guilt • Happiness • Hate • Homesickness • Honor • Hope • Horror • Humility • Jealousy • Joy • Kindness• Loneliness • Love • Lust • Nervousness • Negativity • Panic • Pain • Patience • Peace • Pity • Pride • Rage • Regret • Remorse • Repentance • Righteous • Self-pity • Shame • Shyness • Suffering • Surprise • Sadness • Sorrow • Shock• Suspense • Unhappiness • Vulnerability • Worry • Yearning and Zest

To be... or not to be? That is the question.

I've had more then an inkling to write these days. Almost a 'call' ~ if you will. {Not that I profess my work to be something of grandiose or divine orgin.}

If there is one thing I have learned thus far... is that a true and good author has been 'called' to write. What the writing is about will surface without frustration or forcefulness. The ideas I have for my first novel have come open mindedly, I will call it inspired. Once I began to write; the story seemed to flow well. Suddenly, I started having a bit of writer's block. I quickly {and thankfully it was quick!} realized that I was trying to FORCE what I thought should happen. Characters and plots alike. When, in fact, if it is a 'call' that is pushing me along...then shouldn't I heed to that which is within me in the first place?

I don't believe that my novel or text is already written in some black space in the middle of the universe- waiting for me to tap into it's source and then I will begin to type wildly and unrestrained. But, I do believe that I am being pushed in ways I thought I was never capable! Also, I believe that there is a story of value or lesson for someone in this world- whether now or in the future- that may benefit from what I have or will write. Since this is my belief ...I vow to stick to my 'instincts within' when I write. Since I have allowed this to be my standard; I have found that 'writers block' isn't really a sense I feel anymore.

Now if I could just learn my lessons in life this easily and quickly....I'd be a much happier & better person!

~Autumn


My wedding day ~ August 1994






















Fast forward 13 years...

This is me with my 5th baby.
I don't care to have my blog full
of pictures of ME...so this is it!